copy: second-round copy review across console, settings, agent and server messages

- Trim descriptions, empty states, confirm buttons and toasts to facts
- Unify terms per glossary: 待处理/待识别/整理记录/运行记录/凭证/子会话/Agent 上游
- Subscription-login termsNote states facts only (borrowed client identity, ToS/ban risk)
- Shorter, concrete goal templates for built-in Agent checks
- Human-readable nouns instead of table names in instance CRUD errors
- Audit labels for pi_upstream / schedule / automation_grant actions
- Glossary: add 上游、订阅登录、凭证、定时任务、巡检、运行记录、子会话、停止、持续授权

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <[email protected]>

apps/web/app/routes/console/agent.tsx

@@ -18,14 +18,11 @@ export default function AgentPage() {
 
   return (
     <>
-      <PageHeader
-        title="Agent 会话"
-        description="交代目标，Agent 在授权范围内边执行边汇报；只要方案时，它只调查不执行。"
-      />
+      <PageHeader title="Agent 会话" description="交代目标,Agent 在授权范围内执行并汇报。只要方案时只调查,不执行。" />
       {mock ? (
         <div className="mb-4 flex flex-wrap items-center gap-3 rounded-xl border border-warning/40 bg-warning/10 px-4 py-3 text-caption text-warning">
           <FlaskConical className="h-4 w-4 shrink-0" />
-          <span className="min-w-0 flex-1">演示模式:会话是本地假数据,不连后端,不会产生任何动作。</span>
+          <span className="min-w-0 flex-1">演示模式:会话是本地假数据,不连接后端,不执行任何操作。</span>
           <Button variant="outline" size="sm" onClick={() => window.location.assign("/console/agent?mock=0")}>
             退出演示
           </Button>
@@ -54,8 +51,8 @@ export default function AgentPage() {
           <div className="flex gap-3 rounded-xl border border-border/70 p-4 text-caption text-muted-foreground">
             <ShieldCheck aria-hidden className="mt-0.5 size-4 shrink-0" />
             <div className="space-y-1">
-              <p>每一次工具调用都经服务端授权校验:不在白名单或没有授权覆盖的调用会被拒绝，并在对话里醒目标出。</p>
-              <p>运行结束后，汇报分两栏:模型的自述只作参考，"系统核实的结果"取自下载计划、下载任务与整理记录。</p>
+              <p>每次工具调用都经服务端授权校验,不在白名单或没有授权的调用会被拒绝并在对话里标出。</p>
+              <p>汇报分两栏:模型自述仅供参考,"系统核实的结果"取自下载计划、下载任务和整理记录。</p>
             </div>
           </div>
         </div>

apps/web/app/routes/console/audit.tsx

@@ -37,6 +37,12 @@ const ACTION_LABEL: Record<string, string> = {
   "secret.delete": "删除凭证",
   "site_account.credentials_set": "录入站点凭证",
   "engine.run_cancel": "取消引擎运行",
+  "pi_upstream.oauth_start": "开始订阅登录",
+  "pi_upstream.oauth_login": "完成订阅登录",
+  "pi_upstream.oauth_logout": "退出订阅登录",
+  "schedule.run_now": "立即执行定时任务",
+  "schedule.skip": "跳过定时任务",
+  "acquisition_plan.manual_submit": "手动提交下载计划",
 };
 const VERB: Record<string, string> = { create: "新建", update: "修改", delete: "删除", test: "测试", verify: "校验" };
 const NOUN: Record<string, string> = {
@@ -44,6 +50,9 @@ const NOUN: Record<string, string> = {
   downloader_instance: "下载器",
   media_server_instance: "媒体服务器",
   path_mapping: "路径映射",
+  pi_upstream: "Agent 上游",
+  schedule: "定时任务",
+  automation_grant: "持续授权",
 };
 function actionLabel(a: string): string {
   if (ACTION_LABEL[a]) return ACTION_LABEL[a];

apps/web/app/routes/console/downloads.tsx

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ export default function DownloadsPage() {
         footer={
           open ? (
             <Button asChild variant="outline" size="sm">
-              <Link to={consolePath("downloads", open.id)}>在独立页面打开</Link>
+              <Link to={consolePath("downloads", open.id)}>打开详情页</Link>
             </Button>
           ) : null
         }

apps/web/app/routes/console/home.tsx

@@ -155,10 +155,10 @@ function AutomationBanner({ a }: { a: Dashboard["automation"] }) {
           </div>
           <p className="mt-0.5 text-caption text-muted-foreground">
             {paused
-              ? "自动收录、下载、整理都已停下；查询与手动操作仍可用。"
+              ? "自动收录、下载、整理已停止,手动操作仍可用。"
               : readOnly
-                ? "恢复后的只读对账：只核对不写入，确认无误后再关掉。"
-                : `${a.activeSubscriptions} 个订阅在追踪，按规则自动收录、下载与入库。`}
+                ? "只核对,不写入。确认无误后关闭。"
+                : `${a.activeSubscriptions} 个订阅在追踪,自动收录、下载和整理。`}
           </p>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ function AutomationBanner({ a }: { a: Dashboard["automation"] }) {
             checked={readOnly}
             disabled={update.isPending}
             onCheckedChange={(v) =>
-              setAutomation({ readOnlyReconcile: v }, v ? "已进入只读对账模式" : "已退出只读对账模式").catch(() => {})
+              setAutomation({ readOnlyReconcile: v }, v ? "已开启只读对账" : "已关闭只读对账").catch(() => {})
             }
             aria-label="只读对账模式"
           />
@@ -193,8 +193,8 @@ function AutomationBanner({ a }: { a: Dashboard["automation"] }) {
               </Button>
             }
             title="暂停全部自动化？"
-            description="自动收录、下载、整理会停下，已提交的下载任务不受影响。随时可以恢复。"
-            confirmLabel="暂停"
+            description="自动收录、下载、整理会停止,已提交的下载任务不受影响。可随时恢复。"
+            confirmLabel="暂停自动化"
             onConfirm={() => setAutomation({ enabled: false }, "自动化已暂停")}
           />
         )}
@@ -278,9 +278,9 @@ function CurrentWork({ w }: { w: Dashboard["currentWork"] }) {
 
 function NeedsAttention({ n }: { n: Dashboard["needsAttention"] }) {
   return (
-    <Section title="需要我处理" icon={AlertTriangle} to={consolePath("inbox")}>
+    <Section title="待处理" icon={AlertTriangle} to={consolePath("inbox")}>
       {n.total === 0 ? (
-        <EmptyState plain icon={CircleCheck} title="没有待你决定的事" className="py-6" />
+        <EmptyState plain icon={CircleCheck} title="没有待处理事项" className="py-6" />
       ) : (
         <>
           <p className="mb-2 text-title-sm font-semibold text-warning tabular-nums">
@@ -308,8 +308,8 @@ function CacheSection({ c }: { c: Dashboard["cache"] }) {
         <EmptyState
           plain
           icon={HardDrive}
-          title="尚未登记下载器"
-          description="添加下载器实例后显示缓存卷水位。"
+          title="还没有下载器"
+          description="添加下载器后显示缓存水位。"
           className="py-6"
         />
       ) : (
@@ -401,13 +401,7 @@ function SourcesSection({ s }: { s: Dashboard["sources"] }) {
   return (
     <Section title="来源健康" icon={Radio} to={consolePath("sources")}>
       {rows.length === 0 ? (
-        <EmptyState
-          plain
-          icon={Radio}
-          title="还没有来源"
-          description="在站点工作台登记站点,在来源健康新建 Feed。"
-          className="py-6"
-        />
+        <EmptyState plain icon={Radio} title="还没有来源" description="登记站点或新建 Feed 后显示。" className="py-6" />
       ) : (
         <ul className="divide-y divide-border/60">
           {rows.slice(0, 8).map((r) => {
@@ -438,7 +432,7 @@ function RecentOutput({ items }: { items: Dashboard["recentOutput"] }) {
   return (
     <Section title="最近产出" icon={ListTodo} to={consolePath("organize")}>
       {items.length === 0 ? (
-        <EmptyState plain icon={ListTodo} title="还没有入库记录" className="py-6" />
+        <EmptyState plain icon={ListTodo} title="还没有整理记录" className="py-6" />
       ) : (
         <ul className="divide-y divide-border/60">
           {items.slice(0, 6).map((r) => {
@@ -478,7 +472,7 @@ export default function Home() {
     <>
       <PageHeader
         title="首页"
-        description="系统是否在推进目标、完成了什么、还有什么缺口、是否需要你。"
+        description="目标进度、今日产出、缺口和待处理事项。"
         actions={
           <div className="flex items-center gap-2">
             <LiveIndicator />
@@ -499,7 +493,7 @@ export default function Home() {
           ))}
         </div>
       ) : q.isError ? (
-        <ErrorState title="首页数据加载失败" error={q.error} onRetry={() => q.refetch()} />
+        <ErrorState title="首页加载失败" error={q.error} onRetry={() => q.refetch()} />
       ) : (
         <>
           <AutomationBanner a={q.data.automation} />

apps/web/app/routes/console/identity.tsx

@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ export default function IdentityPage() {
           <Button asChild variant="outline" size="sm">
             <Link to={INBOX_IDENTITY}>
               <Inbox />
-              待确认身份
+              确认身份
             </Link>
           </Button>
         }

apps/web/app/routes/console/schedules.tsx

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ export default function SchedulesPage() {
       ) : board.isError ? (
         <ErrorState error={board.error} onRetry={() => board.refetch()} />
       ) : items.length === 0 ? (
-        <EmptyState icon={CalendarClock} title="还没有登记的定时任务" description="worker 启动后会自动登记。" />
+        <EmptyState icon={CalendarClock} title="还没有定时任务" description="worker 启动后自动登记。" />
       ) : (
         <div className="grid items-start gap-4 md:grid-cols-2 xl:grid-cols-3 2xl:grid-cols-5">
           {GROUP_ORDER.map((g) => {
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ export default function SchedulesPage() {
                 </h2>
                 {jobs.length === 0 ? (
                   <p className="rounded-xl border border-dashed border-border/70 px-4 py-6 text-center text-meta text-muted-foreground">
-                    {g === "agent" ? "暂无巡检,点「新建巡检」添加。" : "暂无任务。"}
+                    {g === "agent" ? "还没有巡检。" : "还没有定时任务。"}
                   </p>
                 ) : (
                   jobs.map((j) => (

apps/web/app/routes/console/settings.tsx

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ export default function SettingsPage() {
 
   return (
     <>
-      <PageHeader title="设置" description="全局参数、接入的实例与凭证。凭证只写入,保存后不回显。" />
+      <PageHeader title="设置" description="全局参数、实例与凭证。凭证保存后不回显。" />
       <div className="grid gap-6 lg:grid-cols-[13.5rem_minmax(0,1fr)] lg:gap-8">
         {/* 窄屏:顶部下拉 */}
         <div className="lg:hidden">

apps/web/app/routes/console/sites.$siteId.tsx

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ const PROMOS = [
 ];
 const RESOLUTION: { value: ResolutionStatus; label: string }[] = [
   { value: "resolved", label: "已识别" },
-  { value: "unresolved", label: "未识别" },
+  { value: "unresolved", label: "待识别" },
   { value: "ambiguous", label: "有歧义" },
   { value: "unidentifiable", label: "无法识别" },
 ];
@@ -358,11 +358,7 @@ export default function SiteWorkbenchPage() {
         </TabsContent>
 
         <TabsContent value="origin">
-          <EmptyState
-            icon={Globe}
-            title="原站视图尚未提供"
-            description={<>计划在 M2 提供。资源详情里有站点 ID 和来源时间,可据此到原站查看。</>}
-          />
+          <EmptyState icon={Globe} title="原站视图暂未提供" description={<>资源详情里有站点 ID,可据此到原站查看。</>} />
         </TabsContent>
 
         <TabsContent value="snapshots">

apps/web/app/routes/console/sites.tsx

@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ export default function SitesPage() {
         <EmptyState
           icon={Globe}
           title="还没有登记站点"
-          description="登记站点并填写账号凭证后,可在这里浏览和搜索资源。"
+          description="登记站点并填写账号后,在这里浏览和搜索资源。"
           action={
             <Button size="sm" onClick={() => setRegistering(true)}>
               <Plus />

apps/web/app/routes/console/sources.tsx

@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ export default function SourcesPage() {
     <>
       <PageHeader
         title="来源健康"
-        description="单个站点的快照、Feed 与账号在站点工作台。"
+        description="单个站点的快照、Feed 和账号在站点工作台管理。"
         actions={
           <Button size="sm" onClick={() => setCreating(true)}>
             <Plus />