copy: second-round copy review across console, settings, agent and server messages

- Trim descriptions, empty states, confirm buttons and toasts to facts
- Unify terms per glossary: 待处理/待识别/整理记录/运行记录/凭证/子会话/Agent 上游
- Subscription-login termsNote states facts only (borrowed client identity, ToS/ban risk)
- Shorter, concrete goal templates for built-in Agent checks
- Human-readable nouns instead of table names in instance CRUD errors
- Audit labels for pi_upstream / schedule / automation_grant actions
- Glossary: add 上游、订阅登录、凭证、定时任务、巡检、运行记录、子会话、停止、持续授权

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <[email protected]>

apps/web/app/components/agent/agent-conversation.tsx

@@ -174,10 +174,10 @@ export function ToolCallCard({
         reason={authReason ?? call.reason ?? "未授权"}
         explanation={
           authReason
-            ? '有副作用的能力必须命中有效的持续授权(automation_grant)或单次审批(approval),由服务端在执行前核对;模型声称"用户已同意"不会被采信。需要放行时到「设置 → 持续授权」发放,或对计划申请单次审批。'
+            ? '有副作用的能力需要有效的持续授权或单次审批,由服务端在执行前核对,模型声称"用户已同意"无效。发布收录策略会生成持续授权,也可以为计划申请单次审批。'
             : mode === "plan_only" && writeKind
-              ? "本次是「只要方案」:白名单只放行只读、预览、提案类能力,执行类调用一律拒绝。要真正执行,请按方案以执行模式重新发起。"
-              : "这个能力不在本次运行的能力白名单内(或已超出调用预算),调用在到达处理器前就被拦下。Agent 无法绕过。"
+              ? "本次是「只要方案」,只放行只读、预览、提案类能力。要执行,点「按方案执行」。"
+              : "这个能力不在本次运行的白名单内,或已超出调用预算,调用没有执行。"
         }
         parameters={[
           { id: "call", label: "调用 ID", value: call.toolCallId },
@@ -219,9 +219,7 @@ export function ToolCallCard({
         <dt className="text-muted-foreground">幂等键</dt>
         <dd className="min-w-0 font-mono break-all text-foreground/80">
           {audit?.idempotencyKey ??
-            (meta && meta.kind !== "read"
-              ? "由服务端生成(能力:版本:运行:输入哈希),审计未取到"
-              : "只读能力不记操作账本")}
+            (meta && meta.kind !== "read" ? "服务端已生成,审计里没有取到" : "只读能力不记操作账本")}
         </dd>
         {audit?.grantId || audit?.approvalId ? (
           <>
@@ -298,13 +296,13 @@ function EndNotice({ item }: { item: Extract<StreamItem, { kind: "end" }> }) {
               {budget
                 ? `超出预算${item.budget ? `(${BUDGET_LABEL[item.budget] ?? item.budget})` : ""},已停止`
                 : aborted
-                  ? "已中止"
+                  ? "已停止"
                   : "运行失败"}
             </p>
             {item.message ? <p className="mt-0.5 text-caption break-words">{item.message}</p> : null}
             {budget ? (
               <p className="mt-1 text-meta text-muted-foreground">
-                已完成的外部动作不会撤销;可调大预算后追加消息续跑。
+                已完成的外部动作不会撤销。调大预算后追加消息可继续运行。
               </p>
             ) : null}
           </MessageBubbleContent>
@@ -636,7 +634,7 @@ export function ApprovalItem({ approval: a }: { approval: Approval }) {
     <ApprovalCard
       status={status}
       title={`批准执行这份${PLAN_LABEL[a.planType] ?? a.planType}?`}
-      description={a.reason ?? "审批绑定计划 ID、payload hash 与版本号;计划变化后旧审批自动失效。"}
+      description={a.reason ?? "计划变化后,这份审批自动失效。"}
       badges={
         <>
           {risk ? <RiskBadge level={risk} /> : null}
@@ -645,7 +643,7 @@ export function ApprovalItem({ approval: a }: { approval: Approval }) {
       }
       onApprove={() => act("approved")}
       onReject={() => act("rejected")}
-      disabledReason={admin ? undefined : "只有控制台管理员会话能批准或拒绝"}
+      disabledReason={admin ? undefined : "只有管理员能批准或拒绝"}
       result={
         a.decidedAt
           ? `${a.status === "approved" ? "批准" : a.status === "rejected" ? "拒绝" : "处理"}于 ${formatDateTime(a.decidedAt)}`
@@ -736,7 +734,7 @@ export function FinalReport({
         <StreamingResponse status="complete" copyText={said || undefined} contentClassName="max-h-60 overflow-auto">
           {said || "(没有文字汇报)"}
         </StreamingResponse>
-        <p className="mt-2 text-meta text-muted-foreground">模型的自述，仅供参考，不作为完成依据。</p>
+        <p className="mt-2 text-meta text-muted-foreground">仅供参考,不作为完成依据。</p>
       </div>
       <div className="min-w-0 rounded-xl border border-border/70 bg-foreground/[0.02] p-3">
         <p className="mb-1.5 flex items-center gap-1.5 text-label font-semibold tracking-[0.18em] text-muted-foreground uppercase">
@@ -798,12 +796,12 @@ export function FinalReport({
               />
             ) : null}
             <p className="mt-2 text-meta text-muted-foreground">
-              汇总自下载计划、下载任务与整理记录(生成于 {formatDateTime(report.generatedAt)}
-              );"已提交"只代表进入下载器，整理成功才算入库。
+              取自下载计划、下载任务和整理记录(生成于 {formatDateTime(report.generatedAt)}
+              )。"已提交"指已进入下载器,整理成功才算入库。
             </p>
           </>
         ) : (
-          <p className="mt-2 text-meta text-muted-foreground">服务端汇报尚未生成；以任务页、整理记录的实际状态为准。</p>
+          <p className="mt-2 text-meta text-muted-foreground">服务端汇报还没有生成,以任务和整理记录的实际状态为准。</p>
         )}
         {run.error ? (
           <p className="mt-2 text-caption break-words text-destructive">
@@ -833,7 +831,7 @@ export function RunAnnouncer({ status, finished }: { status: AgentRunStatus; fin
     prev.current = status;
   }, [status]);
   useEffect(() => {
-    if (finished) setMsg("回复完成，最终汇报已生成");
+    if (finished) setMsg("最终汇报已生成");
   }, [finished]);
   return (
     <span className="sr-only" role="status" aria-live="polite">

apps/web/app/components/agent/agent-drawer.tsx

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ export function AgentDrawer() {
               Agent
             </SheetTitle>
             <SheetDescription className="break-words">
-              {context?.label ? `当前对象:${context.label}` : "交代目标，Agent 在授权范围内边执行边汇报。"}
+              {context?.label ? `当前对象:${context.label}` : "交代目标,Agent 在授权范围内执行并汇报。"}
               <span className="ml-1 hidden text-muted-foreground/75 sm:inline">
                 ({agentShortcutLabel()} 开关,Esc 关闭)
               </span>

apps/web/app/components/agent/agent-run-panel.tsx

@@ -37,16 +37,16 @@ import {
 import { SubagentTree } from "./agent-subagent-tree.tsx";
 import { useAgentStream } from "./use-agent-stream.ts";
 
-const TRIGGER_LABEL = { user: "用户发起", event: "事件触发", schedule: "定时", subagent: "子代理" } as const;
+const TRIGGER_LABEL = { user: "用户发起", event: "事件触发", schedule: "定时", subagent: "子会话" } as const;
 
 export const MODE_HELP: Record<AgentMode, { label: string; help: string }> = {
   execute: {
     label: "授权内执行",
-    help: "在已授权范围内执行;未授权的动作会被服务端拒绝并在对话里标出。",
+    help: "未授权的动作会被服务端拒绝并在对话里标出。",
   },
   plan_only: {
     label: "只要方案",
-    help: "只调查、出方案，不执行任何写操作;满意后可一键按方案执行。",
+    help: "只调查、出方案,不执行写操作。之后可按方案执行。",
   },
 };
 
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ export function GoalComposer({
         <div className="pt-2">
           <p className="mb-1.5 flex items-center gap-1.5 px-1 text-meta text-muted-foreground">
             <Sparkles aria-hidden className="size-3.5" />
-            试试这些
+            常用目标
           </p>
           <ul aria-label="快捷目标" className="flex flex-col gap-1.5">
             {suggestions.map((s) => (
@@ -267,9 +267,7 @@ export function AgentRunPanel({
           className="flex items-center gap-2 rounded-xl border border-warning/40 bg-warning/10 px-3 py-2 text-caption text-warning"
         >
           <WifiOff aria-hidden className="size-4 shrink-0" />
-          <span className="min-w-0 flex-1">
-            实时连接中断，正在重连;恢复后按 after= 补读漏掉的事件，期间每 2.5 秒轮询兜底。
-          </span>
+          <span className="min-w-0 flex-1">实时连接中断,正在重连。期间每 2.5 秒轮询一次。</span>
         </div>
       ) : null}
       {live.error ? (
@@ -320,7 +318,7 @@ export function AgentRunPanel({
           maxRows={6}
           maxLength={8000}
           aria-label="追加消息"
-          placeholder={streaming ? "补充或纠正(运行中也可追加)" : "追加消息，继续这次会话"}
+          placeholder={streaming ? "补充或纠正(运行中也可追加)" : "追加消息"}
           toolbar={
             mode === "plan_only" && finished ? (
               <Button type="button" size="sm" variant="outline" onClick={executePlan} disabled={create.isPending}>
@@ -334,7 +332,7 @@ export function AgentRunPanel({
         />
         <p className="px-1 text-meta text-muted-foreground">
           {mode === "plan_only" && finished
-            ? "「按方案执行」会以授权内执行模式新开一次运行，仍受服务端授权校验。"
+            ? "「按方案执行」会新开一次授权内执行的运行,仍受服务端授权校验。"
             : MODE_HELP[mode].help}{" "}
           Enter 发送,Shift+Enter 换行{streaming ? ",停止 = 中止本次运行" : ""}。
         </p>
@@ -344,12 +342,12 @@ export function AgentRunPanel({
         open={confirmStop}
         onOpenChange={setConfirmStop}
         title="停止这次运行?"
-        description="停止后续步骤；已经完成的外部动作(如已提交的下载)不会被撤销。"
-        confirmLabel="停止"
+        description="后续步骤不再执行,已完成的外部动作(如已提交的下载)不会撤销。"
+        confirmLabel="停止运行"
         destructive
         onConfirm={() =>
           abort.mutateAsync(r.id).then(
-            () => toast.success("已请求中止"),
+            () => toast.success("已请求停止"),
             (e) => {
               toast.error(errorMessage(e));
               throw e;

apps/web/app/components/agent/agent-session-list.tsx

@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ export function AgentSessionList({
             plain
             icon={Bot}
             title={status ? "没有这个状态的会话" : "还没有会话"}
-            description={status ? "换个筛选看看。" : "交代一个目标开始；也可以在任意页面右上角打开 Agent 侧栏。"}
+            description={status ? undefined : "交代一个目标开始。任意页面都能从右下角打开 Agent。"}
           />
         ) : (
           <ul className="space-y-1">

apps/web/app/components/agent/agent-subagent-tree.tsx

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ function budgetText(b: Record<string, number | undefined>) {
   if (b.maxTokens !== undefined) parts.push(`${tokens(b.maxTokens)} token`);
   if (b.maxDurationSec !== undefined) parts.push(`${b.maxDurationSec}s`);
   if (b.maxCostUsd !== undefined) parts.push(`$${b.maxCostUsd}`);
-  return parts.length ? parts.join(" · ") : "按设置缺省";
+  return parts.length ? parts.join(" · ") : "沿用设置";
 }
 
 function Node({ node, byParent, depth }: { node: AgentRunNode; byParent: Map<string, AgentRunNode[]>; depth: number }) {

apps/web/app/components/agent/quick-goals.ts

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ const RULES: Rule[] = [
   },
   {
     match: /^\/console\/identity/,
-    goals: ["帮我识别待识别池里的文件", "找出外部身份映射可能错误的作品", "补全缺少元数据的作品"],
+    goals: ["识别待识别的文件", "找出外部身份可能错误的作品", "补全缺少元数据的作品"],
   },
   {
     match: /^\/console\/subscriptions/,
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ const RULES: Rule[] = [
   },
   {
     match: /^\/console\/sources/,
-    goals: ["哪些来源不新鲜了,原因是什么", "检查所有 RSS 的抓取状态", "最近一天各来源抓到了什么"],
+    goals: ["哪些来源不新鲜了,原因是什么", "检查所有 Feed 的抓取状态", "最近一天各来源抓到了什么"],
   },
   {
     match: /^\/console\/engine/,